Friday, March 29, 2019

March 29, 2019 - Friday

Class Work

Get ready for a peer editing activity.  This was the assignment.

Three parts:
1.     I.   Define the problem.
a.       Prove the problem exists by explaining who or what has caused, led to, or is contributing to the problem.
b.      Explain the extent of the problem
c. Identify those impacted by the problem
Tip: Be sure the information is specific. 

2.       II Explain the effects of the problem. This is looking to the future. 
a.       What is happening now because of the problem?
b.      What will happen if the problem is not addressed?
c.       What are the dangers of not solving the problem?

2.       Please include:

a.       A chart or graph
b.      A personal experience  
c.       Evidence from at least two expert sources
3.     III  Call for action! What steps can be taken to solve the problem?
a.       Tell what and how to solve the problem.
b.      Admit that there are other possible solutions, but focus on why your solution is the best. (Remember the deer hunting essay.)
c.       Remember that readers are concerned about time and money when it comes to solving problems.
d.      The solutions must be possible and realistic.
 For example, if you suggest recycling, explain how effortless the process can be. 


Tips:


Be sure to:

1.       Use in-text citations. Use MLA formatting. 
2.       Place all in-text citation sources on the Works Cited page.Make sure there are no extra sources on the Works Cited page.

3.       Pay attention to the grammar, usage, and mechanics. Run spell and grammar check.

Post the final copy of the essay by 11:50 am today. 

Enjoy your weekend! Final grades will be posted by the end of the day on Monday. 

Thank you for a productive and interesting semester!
  

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Wednesday, March 27, 2019

March 27, 2019 - Wednesday

Class Work

Reminders:  Post your technology paper if you have not already done so. (No exceptions!)

Come to class on Friday as it is the exam. If you plan on passing this course, you MUST come to class on Friday. (EMCC Policy)

Today you will be working on the "Save Mother Nature" draft.

It is an essay in three parts. Let's review how to do this!


Three parts:
1.     I.   Define the problem.
a.       Prove the problem exists by explaining who or what has caused, led to, or is contributing to the problem.
b.      Explain the extent of the problem
c. Identify those impacted by the problem
Tip: Be sure the information is specific. 

2.       II Explain the effects of the problem. This is looking to the future. 
a.       What is happening now because of the problem?
b.      What will happen if the problem is not addressed?
c.       What are the dangers of not solving the problem?

2.       Please include:

a.       A chart or graph
b.      A personal experience  
c.       Evidence from at least two expert sources
3.     III  Call for action! What steps can be taken to solve the problem?
a.       Tell what and how to solve the problem.
b.      Admit that there are other possible solutions, but focus on why your solution is the best. (Remember the deer hunting essay.)
c.       Remember that readers are concerned about time and money when it comes to solving problems.
d.      The solutions must be possible and realistic.
 For example, if you suggest recycling, explain how effortless the process can be. 


Tips:


Be sure to:

1.       Use in-text citations. Use MLA formatting. 
2.       Place all in-text citation sources on the Works Cited page.Make sure there are no extra sources on the Works Cited page.

3.       Pay attention to the grammar, usage, and mechanics. Run spell and grammar check.


You are now ready to continue with your research. 

For the time remaining, conduct research. As you research, you will discover articles, videos, and  interviews that addesss the definition of the problem, the causes, and possible solutions. Be sure to note what information goes where. Consider interviewing a classmate or two to gain insight into your essay. 

Segment I: Work on Part I of the essay. 
  • Keep track of your sources as the paper must follow MLA formatting and include in-text citations and a Works Cited page.
  • At the end of the time, Post a summary of what you found in CANVAS. (20 points. ) If you wish, just take notes and post those.
Segment 2: Work on Part II - Effects

Segment 3: Work on Part III - Call for action.

Post the draft in CANVAS by the beginning of class on Friday - 9:00 am. Be on time.

We will begin with a peer editing activity and follow with time to revise and post.

There will be sharing of the topics from 10:15-11:45. Be ready to share the key points of the essay. (Each person will have 2 minutes.) Call us to action!






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Monday, March 25, 2019

March 25, 2019 - Monday

Class Work

1.  Peer editing activity: Have your essay showing on the computer screen or have a paper copy ready. There is a bright yellow peer editing sheet! (Random selection of editors)

2. The final copy of the technology essay is due on Wednesday. Post in CANVAS. (100 points)

Reminder: This is our last week of class. The final exam is Friday. You MUST be present in order to pass this course. (EMCC Policy) 

Now, on to the final essay! Remember that nature walk that we did not have time to take on Friday? Today is just as glorious, so we will be walking, looking, listening, and capturing the messages from Mother Nature.

Listen to the instructions. Go outside for 12 minutes. Look, listen, click or sketch, and capture the message. What is Mother Nature trying to say to us? What do we need to understand? 

Nature: What is Mother Nature Telling Us?
With a partner, walk around the campus for 10 minutes and take 10 pictures that create a message.
Description of the picture – what did you see?


Message- what is it saying?


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Place both names on the sheet to submit. LISTEN and WATCH for a sample.

This photo is from the Desert Botanical Gardens in Phoenix. 

cactus garden

Share messages: The messages should be no more than two sentences. Keep it simple. 

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There are many experts and others who say that our planet is in danger. What are some of those dangers?
A. Generate a list at your table. Discuss with the class.
B.  Can we slow down or stop the change? Should we? 
C. What topic is of most interest to you? Why?

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Your final essay will be a Problem/Solution essay. 











Possible local  topics: https://environmentarizona.org/issues

TODAY: Determine a topic. It must be related to climate change/nature. 

Homework:  Locate and summarize two articles related to your topic. Post the summaries in CANVAS. Be sure to keep track of your sources as a Works Cited page is required for the exam. 

Don't forget that EMCC library is available 24/7 on-line. Take a look now. The information you need is probably just a click away!

If time permits,we will view Planet in Peril



Friday, March 22, 2019

March 22, 2019 = Friday

Class Work

How to write an effective conclusion:


Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2L7aeO9fBzE



Sample conclusions - rate and discuss. (Handout)


"Practical Wildlife Management" Sample essay (handout and activity)
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 Conclusion –
Wrap it up for the readers. Leave them with a call to action to either give up or get the gadget you are supporting. Be sure they know why they need or do not need one. Consider:
a.       Convenience
b.      Cost
c.       Safety
d.      Environmental impact - if any
e.      Impact on society/ethics




The entire draft of your essay is due on Monday. Post it in Canvas. (50 points)
Be sure to refer to the instructions. Just in case you can't find that neon yellow copy, here is another "copy."

Technology – Friend or Foe?
For this essay, you are writing to convince the opposition. Consider the dangers and advantages of technology. For this essay, you must pick a side. Think of this essay as a debate on paper. You must know what the opposition thinks, but you do not support that point of view.
I.                    Introduction –
a.       Identify the specific technology you will be discussing – cell phone, computer, automobile, dishwasher, microwave, GPS, video games, television, apps, photography etc.
b.      Capture the attention of the audience in the normal way with startling statistics, an interesting anecdote, a quotation from an expert, lines from a song or poem, a thought provoking question, etc. In short, make sure that what you say makes the reader want to know more.
c.       In addition, state your thesis – make your point of view clear!
d.      Use claims, reasons, and evidence to build your case
II.                  The body of the paper will do several things –
a.       Convince the reader that they either need or do not need the technology.
b.      Provide a brief history of the specific technology you plan to discuss. What was life like before its invention? When was it invented? How has it evolved? What is its story?
c.       Provide clear evidence to support your point of view. You must have proof from at least four of the following:
                                                               i.      At least three experts/sources. You may use the articles studied in class and articles that specifically relate to your chosen technology.
                                                             ii.      A current news source such as a newspaper or magazine article or news cast.
                                                            iii.      An interview with at least one person who uses the technology.
                                                           iv.      A personal anecdote.
                                                             v.      Lines from literature – poem, short story, or novel.
                                                           vi.       A work of art.
                                                          vii.      Strong statistics from an expert source.
The body of the paper will be several paragraphs in length.
III.                Conclusion –
Wrap it up for the readers. Leave them with a call to action to either give up or get the gadget you are supporting. Be sure they know why they need or do not need one. Consider:
a.       Convenience
b.      Cost
c.       Safety
d.      Environmental impact
e.      Impact on society/ethics





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Now for a bit of writing fun . . .You have been researching and technology. Now it is time to go outside and look, and walk, and write about nature. 

Step #1: Go outside of the building. Walk around. Look at the trees,plants, sky, grass, water, turtles, flowers, etc. Take a picture or make a sketch of one item that sparks a memory for you. (10 minutes)

Step #2: Tell the people at your table what you saw. Share the memory. Tell the story.

Step #3: Write about it. Paint the picture and the experience with words. 

Post in Canvas. (35 points)

Wednesday, March 20, 2019

March 20, 2019 - Wednesday

Class Work

FYI: This is where we are headed.
Technology – Friend or Foe?
For this essay, you are writing to convince the opposition. Consider the dangers and advantages of technology. For this essay, you must pick a side. Think of this essay as a debate on paper. You must know what the opposition thinks, but you do not support that point of view.
I.                    Introduction –
a.       Identify the specific technology you will be discussing – cell phone, computer, automobile, dishwasher, microwave, GPS, video games, television, apps, photography etc.
b.      Capture the attention of the audience in the normal way with startling statistics, an interesting anecdote, a quotation from an expert, lines from a song or poem, a thought provoking question, etc. In short, make sure that what you say makes the reader want to know more.
c.       In addition, state your thesis – make your point of view clear!
d.      Use claims, reasons, and evidence to build your case
II.                  The body of the paper will do several things –
a.       Convince the reader that they either need or do not need the technology.
b.      Provide a brief history of the specific technology you plan to discuss. What was life like before its invention? When was it invented? How has it evolved? What is its story?
c.       Provide clear evidence to support your point of view. You must have proof from at least four of the following:
                                                               i.      At least three experts/sources. You may use the articles studied in class and articles that specifically relate to your chosen technology.
                                                             ii.      A current news source such as a newspaper or magazine article or news cast.
                                                            iii.      An interview with at least one person who uses the technology.
                                                           iv.      A personal anecdote.
                                                             v.      Lines from literature – poem, short story, or novel.
                                                           vi.       A work of art.
                                                          vii.      Strong statistics from an expert source.
The body of the paper will be several paragraphs in length.
III.                Conclusion –
Wrap it up for the readers. Leave them with a call to action to either give up or get the gadget you are supporting. Be sure they know why they need or do not need one. Consider:
a.       Convenience
b.      Cost
c.       Safety
d.      Environmental impact
e.      Impact on society/ethics




On the post-it, write your name, your topic, and the point intend to make. Post it on the side board. 

 What interesting historical information did you find? How can you use this information to make your point. What do the experts say about your technology? (Brief discussion.)

Today, we will be working on 1D, II vii, and II vi. In addition, we will find a quotation that supports your message about the topic.

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A. Now that you know your topic and how you feel about its use, locate a quotation or two that you might consider using in your essay. This quotation might come from a quotation site, song lyrics, a poem, a book, an article. or an expert on the topic. (10 minute search - be ready to share your quotation(s) and discuss in small groups.) Remember to keep track of your sources. MLA style is required. Post in CANVAS. 

B. Looking at art. Today you will be "creating" a mini art gallery. You need to locate a work of art that depicts your chosen technology. As a reminder, these are the questions to consider. 
Looking at Art -
  • What is the title of the work? How does the title help you to understand the message? What is the message?
  • What is the most obvious image in the work. To where is your eye drawn?
  • Look at the colors. Are they symbolic? Would the message be different if the colors were different? Explain.
  • Research the meanings of the major colors in the work you selected. How do the meanings relate to the work and to your topic?
  • Study the shading and shadowing. How do these elements impact the overall message?
Who is the artist? When was the work created? Is the artist's message about a specific technological wonder?  What was going on in the world when the work was created? Is the art universal - speaks to people of all times and in all places, or is it limited to the audience for whom it was created?

Keep track of your sources. MLA formatting is required.

Steps:
1. Locate a work of art.
2. Study it and answer the questions.
3. Be ready to share what you found with the class. We are creating a mini art gallery. Your written words will guide you as you explain the work to the class. 
4. Post the art and your answers in CANVAS.
5. Have the art showing on your screen. You should be able to talk about the art and the technology without reading your notes. You are the guide! 
6. Listen for "sharing" instructions.

C. Conduct a "quick search" and locate statistics related to your technology. 
Consider:
  • The number of items in use or number of people who use the item.
  • The financial costs related to the item - purchase price, monthly charges (if any), amount of electricity required, etc. 
  • Amount of time taken to use the item.
  • Health benefits and/or risks.
  • Number of people helped because of the technology. 
  • Other numbers?
Explain how you can use the numbers to convince the readers that your point of view is correct.

Keep track of your sources. MLA formatting is required. 

Post in CANVAS. 

D. Learn about using using claims, reasons, and evidence to build your essay. 


"Desperately Seeking E-Mail" by Lisa Dreier 


Claim:
What is the point of the essay?







Why?

Because…
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Homework: Fill in your Claim/Reasons/Evidence chart - This will serve as the outline for your essay. 


March 29, 2019 - Friday

Class Work Get ready for a peer editing activity.  This was the assignment. Three parts: 1.      I.    Define  the problem. a.     ...